neděle 12. ledna 2014

I Can´t Write a Poem

Tempting or off-putting?
Occasional or a must?
Popular among students or a nightmare?
A nuisance or a superb teacher love?

I believe that teachers are generally attracted by the topic of creative writing. It is one of the things they claim they would like to learn or do more in the class. On the other hand, we tend to avoid it in adult classes because we think our students are not interested in it or not capable of writing creatively in English.

To unlock your or your students´ creativity J make a list of at least five excuses why you think you can´t write a poem. Then add the ideas to Bruce Lansky´s “I can´t write a poem“ poem grid (in italics).

Here´s my poem:
I can´t write a poem.
Forget it.
You must be kidding.
I´m so busy
I have to prepare my Glossa classes every night
I have to do the dishes and the vacuuming and exercise at least twice 
I am so tired of writing on the board in my class
I want to read books and watch blockbusters on the telly
I simply work too hard
I am not paid enough to be creative
My back hurts all night 
Time’s up? Uh oh!
All I have is this dumb list of excuses.
You like it? Really? No kidding.
Thanks a lot.
I might give it a try J

For me, creative writing is a synonym for unlocking imagination. Imagination is a synonym for playing with the language in an interesting unusual unique original way. Playing with the language is about becoming more fluent and flexible using the target language. To become a more advanced user of a language you have to develop self-confidence and positive motivation. To feel more motivated we like to collaborate with other people and share with them.  


Encourage your own creativity first
A teacher plays the key role. If you do not believe creative writing is important, you can´t make a successful use of it in the classroom. If you never write creatively, your students can never succeed.

Do not believe you can teach creativity
Do not teach them to write creatively, try to unlock creative thinking instead. Look up interesting topics, surprise students, vary tasks, discuss and debate things, let them observe each other, provide creative food for thought, prompt them, make them brainstorm, let them ask. And never give up!

Stretch creative writing muscles regularly!
Add creative writing tasks regularly. Proceed from simple tasks to more complicated ones.

I often write poems and stories with students. Not all poems have to rhyme and yet your students can become poets! Not all stories have to contain 500 words for students to become creative writers!


Here are my personal poem tips

Functional poem
I like to ask my students to use some phrases (e.g. for giving your opinion) from the list in coursebook and prepare a poem (e.g. on the topic of studying English, see NEF Advanced, 1C). Then we collaborate on the final version of the poem.

In my view studying English is interesting for you
In my opinion you should know how to spell garlic and onion
If you ask me I´m good at looking things up in a dictionary
Personally speaking you ought to study hard to become a language king
I feel that studying languages is better than to be a stupid spoilt brat

Which other areas of language could you use this type of a poem for?

Actually, the type mentioned above is an example of internal rhyme. To practise more, ask students to complete lines of verse about a specific topic, e.g. food.

Lollipops are better than old socks
Christmas mincepies are a treat for your eyes
Red apples give you healthy lips

Topic poem
Choose a topic (abstract nouns, emotions, activities). Students work individually then in groups trying to finish the sentence (X is …) in as many different ways as possible on separate slips of paper. Then they reorder the slips of paper making a poem out of it.

Loneliness is a telephone that never rings
Loneliness is spending every weekend alone
Loneliness is setting a place at the table for one
Loneliness is nobody remembering your birthday.

Would you like to compose your “creative writing” topic poem? Creative writing is ….

Variation: Write ten lines, beginning with “I believe …” or “I think …” is a good way to generate ideas on a given topic. 

Group Poem
Give your students four words that fit a rhyming scheme (or brainstorm the words from students), e.g. ABAB = writing, story, exciting, glory. The idea is to compose a poem using these words as the last words in each line of a four line poem.

Can you think of a group poem task which would fit your coursebook topic?

Variation: Give them a rhyming structure of about eight to ten lines. They write a list of words that follow the structure. Then they write a poem.

Many ideas come from Wordgames: Activities for Creative Thinking and Writing, Dianne Bates.

Diamond poem

Students create a poem following the structure below.
                                                ______ (one noun, subject 1 of the poem)
     ______ ______ (two adjectives decribing the noun)
_____ _________ ________ (three gerunds related to the noun)
_________ ________ _________ ________ (four nouns, two connected to subejct and two nouns connected to subject 2)
_____ _________ ________ (three gerunds related to the noun 2)
    ______ ______ (two adjectives decribing the noun 2)
                                                ______ (one noun, subject 2 of the poem)

Would you like to write a poem on students and teachers, or men and women?

Looking forward to your poem ideas. I promise I will add one more for each idea you share with us.

 Here are my tips on writing SMS, minisagas, collaborative stories, fairy tales …

 Prompting


 “Scaffold” the process of writing. It is useful to provide students with various and varied (!) types of writing prompts.


Not surprisingly, I use picture prompts a lot. Pictures from course books, Czech magazines, fotosearch clipart pictures, cartoons with Čtyřlístek, crazy Internet pictures, Rory´s story cubes or Flickr five card stories help me spark my students´ imagination. 

What about “sound“ prompts instead of pictures? Download some sound files/sound effects from the Internet and play them to your students who write a story based on them. E.g. dog barking, opening beer, giggling, a photograph taken, tornado…

Tick the prompts you would like to use in the next week of teaching:

Imagining

I think students are more willing to write creatively if the topic mixes familiar and surprising features.

  • Write Cinderella from the point of view of one of the ungly sisters (rather than create a brand new fairy tale)
  • Explain what Christmas is to a young pine tree is (rather than write a maturita essay on how you celebrate Christmas in the Czech Republic). 

Collaborating

You provide a first part of the sentence. Display it in the class. Then students are asked to add one another part at a time (a sentence, a couple of sentences, a paragraph, a dialogue…) to the story e.g. before the course starts or when they finish a task early.
Variation: Prepare a padlet wall with the beginning of a neverending story. Students keep adding ideas on it.

  
Enjoy your two weeks with creative writing. Unlock your imagination, come up with interesting topics and prompts, collaborate and share!








19 komentářů:

  1. Masterpiece meoP

    I can´t write a poem.
    Forget it.
    You must be kidding.
    I am as creative as a class full of standard students. (means -5 degrees under a flat stone´s creativity)
    I have no pen.
    I broke both arms.
    I hate poems.
    I don't want to borrow a pen.
    I want to drink beer in peace and quiet.
    I could also become famous and future generations would have to read the rubbish!
    Time’s up? Uh oh!
    All I have is this dumb list of excuses.
    You like it? Really? No kidding.
    Thanks a lot.
    I might give it a try.

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  2. Just a tip for owners of smartphones with Android system: there are some applications with various sounds you can use to prompt students as Katka suggest above.

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    1. Kamil, is there any you can recommend to us?
      Here is a page with free sound effects so you can create your own "sound story". http://www.audiomicro.com/free-sound-effects/free-voice-prompts-and-spoken-phrases

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  3. Here is another poem written by my students. The task is to describe a certain thing using verbs of senses (sound, look, smell, feel, taske + adj/like + noun/as if/of...). We created odes on English :) English looks yellow and sounds merry. English also sounds romantic. English tastes sweet and as if You have your mouth full of pudding. English feels as if we touch a distance.
    Of course, you can choose other topics such as Christmas, or abstract nouns (see NEF Advanced :)

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    1. Here is another "English" poem written by Jitka:
      English tastes like fish´n ´chips

      when you have it on your lips


      English smells like salted pop corn.

      Everyone likes it - except newborn.


      English looks like old Big Ben

      likes it every Englishman.


      English sounds like Beatles ´s song

      I can listen to it very long


      English feels like gentle touch,

      for your attention thank you very much.


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    2. Here´s one more example from my class /English by Michael/:
      English looks like Mr.Bean

      English smells like tea with biscuits

      English tastes like Fish & Chips

      English feels like a rainy day

      English sounds like Queen Elisabeth singing „It´s a long way to Tipperary“

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  4. Here is my favourite "poem". Write this poem on the board:
    Kadut
    Kadut ja kukat
    Kadut ja naiset
    Kadut
    Kadut ja kukat ja naiset
    Ja lapset
    Explain to students that it is a poem written in Finnish or any unknown language. They choose the topic of their poem (a noun). Then tell them that ja means "and" in English. Finally, they complete the grid substituting the unknown words with nouns.
    Variation: Tell them to choose a noun (kadut). Tell them "ja" means is. Then they complete the poem. Enjoy it!

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  5. Not quite a poem, but one creative writing exercise i sometimes use is what i call the Writing Game. Basically, each student has a sheet of paper.
    First, they write 3-5 sentences to begin the story. Then they fold the paper so you can only see the last sentence or line. Pass the paper to the student to the right.
    Second, they write the "body" of the story, 3-5 sentences, and repeat the process.
    Third student writes the end of the story, folds it, and passes it.
    Fourth student gets to add a title. Pass one more time and then share (read aloud) the story to the class / group.
    (it is better to do this is groups of 4-5 in larger classes)

    That is the basic idea of the game, and to add structure here are some things I do:
    - Set the type of writing (letter, ghost story, etc). For some classes, it can be good to have the beginning sentence and ending sentence on the board.
    - To practice vocabulary, enforce them to use words from the vocab list in class (or from a previous lesson) in the story. For example, if we are working on a food topic and we have new vocab from types of foods and phrases/things in a restaurant, we can say each part of the story needs 2 food items, and 2 things/phrases from a restaurant.
    - For grammar and tenses, we do similar. Say that each part of the story needs to use the past perfect or past continuous. (specifying tenses that are commonly used such as the past simple is not necessary, since students generally default to this anyway)
    - To enforce the story is on a specific topic, prepare papers with the title already on it. Make sure the title is on the bottom, so that each student can see what the story is about on each part. For example, going with the food and restaurant unit, titles could be "A meal that changed my life" or "The Disaster at the Restaurant"

    Grammar and vocabulary use can be enforced through close monitoring, and/or you can have the students correct each other after they read the story.
    Sometimes I use a less restrictive version if I use it as an end of the class game, since it is quite fun at the end, and more structured when it is a main part of the lesson.

    For some students this is very creative, since they are often tempted to push the rules you set forth. It is quite important to use this activity towards the end of a lesson or unit, so the students have plenty to draw from.

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    1. Great collaborative story procedure, Peterz. I tend to use these stories a lot in bigger groups. I really appreciate the extra "rules" you give to your students, such as recycling vocabulary, producing certain structures, practising specific genres of writing.
      You can use the same procedure to develop characters for stories, students answer your questions and pass the paper to their neighbour after each answer, e.g. Is it he or she? How old is he/she? What does he/she look like? WHat does he/she like doing? WHat is his/her job? etc. When I work with higher levels, I like to recycle prepositional phrases, such as What is he good at? What is she keen on? WHat is he proud of ? What is she happy about? WHat is she weak in? What does he/she speak about all the time? etc. Then they combine two characters and write a story based on the characters.

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  6. Anička Hermanová writes on poems: Off-putting, a must, a nightmare - my students usually get scared to death when I utter the word “creative” and if I dare to add “writing” that’s just too much to cope with. It’s hard work to get them writing so thanks for the "I can’t write a poem" poem, I’m sure it will work as a good icebreaker. I like the Diamond poem as well as I do something similar with my students to teach them to write. I provide them with nouns, adjectives, verbs and adverbs and ask them to write a short story. Alternatively, you can give them just nouns and verbs and they can add adjectives, adverbs and linkers later.
    As for a functional poem, I think you can use anything, e.g.:
    NEF Advanced, Unit 3B, inversion:

    Not only do I hate writing poems, but I am also too shy.
    In no way will I ever become creative.
    Neither do I thing it’s silly.
    Under no circumstances will I open my heart and tell you that not until you write your first poem will you start trusting your own abilities.
    Rarely have I met more creative students than you.


    Thanks Anička for nice tips and examples. It is so hard to be creative on Inversion so I really appreciate your combining the functional poem with this rather off-putting grammar structure :)

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  7. I used the group poem as a starter this past week and it was fun. Our topic has been clothes, so we came up with A: clothes B: smart A: the most B: heart. Unfortunately, I didn´t take pictures of the actual poems but they were very good.
    A creative writing activity that has always worked well for me is “Band Profiles”. I google images of weird music bands (heavy metal, country etc.) and distribute them among pairs of students. I first ask them to think of a name for the band. Then they pass the sheet to the pair sitting next to them. Then they come up with the style the band plays – pass – coutry of origin – pass – name of their latest album – pass – name of the latest hit – pass – chorus of the hit. You can add or leave things out.

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  8. It is nice you managed to combine the group poem with a course book topic. What a pity we can´t enjoy the poems :) I like your "Band Profiles" idea a lot, especially the chorus part, of course. I think you could combine it with the group poem idea, too. I do a similar thing but we set up a story character this way, e.g. They write a name, age, nationality, likes, hates, personality traits, last thing they said, etc. Then they write a story with the character (I usually assign a genre, e.g. a horror story, a fairy tale....) Or, they take on the identity then and answer some coursebook "personal questions from questionnaires and so on.

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  9. Here is my last poem idea. I distribute the nursery rhyme Hickory Dickory Dock to students. Their task is to remember it in one minute, put the sheet aside and then say the nursery rhyme to their partner. Here´s the nursery rhyme:
    Hickory, dickory, dock,
    The mouse ran up the clock.
    The clock struck one,
    The mouse ran down,
    Hickory, dickory, dock.

    Then I distribute the following grid:
    Hickory dickory dock
    the mouse ran up the clock
    the clock struck _________
    the mouse said: _________
    hickory dickory dock.

    THen I distribute numbers 1-12 to students. They have to use their number in the poem and complete the missing line, which must rhyme with the number. E.g. THe clock struck ELEVEN, the mouse said: AM I IN THE HEAVEN? or The clock struck
    TEN, the mouse said: OH NO, WHERE IS MY BRAND NEW PEN?
    We always have a great fun.

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  10. I love poetry and I would love to use poems in my lessons. I had been trying to find some way how to do it BUT: I think I can’t write a poem… with my students.
    I teach Czech for foreigners, mostly A1 levels, 121 (or 122) courses, usually only 90 mins per week (and duration of some of them is limited to 40 TU). To be honest I can’t really imagine asking my students to write a poem. Their aim is mostly to feel less lost here in the Czech Republic. They don’t want to learn Czech perfectly – anyway, they think it is not possible. Then, the most creative task I give to them is usually something like “imagine yourself going to potraviny shop and buying something very typical for you, something you would really buy there and write a dialogue with a shopkeeper” or “remember about your last visit at the doctor, please write your dialogue”.
    I remember I used to teach a small group of students at B1-2 level. We did some creative writing, though it was not really a poem. We made comics, we had to finish a story or a fairy tale they listened to / they watched (I used e.g. Jak pejsek a kočička dělali dort – this is very useful for practising genitive) and so on.
    I am so jealous now to you, English teachers, who have students at higher levels and bigger groups. But I am curious what do you think is it possible to use creative writing also for lower levels? And for 121 once a week courses (usually not doing their homework)?

    Marcela

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    1. Hello Marcela, thanks a lot for your comment and the interesting questions you asked. My answers to both/all questions are "Yes" "Yes", of course :) I have used creative writing both in elementary courses and in 1-2-1 courses; we do all the creative writing in the classroom (never for homework unless the students do it voluntarily). Here are my tips: Show your learners from the very beginning that to write a poem you do not have to use rhymes! Actually, rhymes are banned J "Scaffold" them; using some grids/starters/outlines always helps - that is why I have included all the examples such as diamond poem or hickory dickory dock. In group classes, let them collaborate and share ideas. Motivate them – display the poem somewhere, make them share it with someone, make them type it, use wordle … My final tip – take part in the writing process. Show them your own poem attempts or write the first poem together with them J
      Here is a sample grid adapted from old English File book (elementary leve). I am sure you can easily adapt it to practise accusative and why not to link it to potraviny store or films they like watching or things to do in Prague …

      I like _________
      I like _________
      I like _________
      But there is one thing I don´t like: ______________

      Sample poem:

      I like reading books
      I like watching films
      I like playing scrabble
      But there is one thing I don´t like: arguing

      As a follow up, two or more students can then compare their poems and rewrite it as a collaborative poem:

      We like ________________
      We like ________________
      We like ________________
      But there is one thing we don´t like: __________________

      I think it is really challenging for students to write their own poem in L2 at the beginning of the course J At any level, being creative in the target language provides strong motivation and stimulus.


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    2. Katka, thank you very much for encouraging me. I have decided to try some poem activity with my students this week.

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  11. And by the way, Katka, I really liked poems from your students, mostly Jitkas. It just perfect.

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  12. Thanks for the top tip for making poems fun. It went down pretty well with most of the classes I tried it in.
    One group loved it, so I followed it up the next week with some reading of Dr.Suess poems (just for fun). These poems are meant for children, and have a lot of nonsense words in them, but they are great fun to read out loud.

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    1. Thanks a lot Simon for reminding us of Dr. Suess poems. I like them, too. Here is one I used with my AG8 students when we discussed age and ageing :) http://www.woodriverfire.com/drseuss.htm
      Or watch the stories online, e.g. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5GedjRxj9EA on yawning.

      I can also recommend Roald Dahl´s Revolting Rhymes. My students really love the Little Red Riding Hood and did a really good job coming up with the rhymes ! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y3uVQIhSYfY

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