Tempting
or off-putting?
Occasional
or a must?
Popular
among students or a nightmare?
A nuisance
or a superb teacher love?
I believe
that teachers are generally attracted by the topic of creative writing.
It is one of the things they claim they would like to learn or do more in the
class. On the other hand, we tend to avoid it in adult classes because we think
our students are not interested in it or not capable of writing creatively in
English.
To unlock
your or your students´ creativity J make a list of at
least five excuses why you think you can´t write a poem. Then add the ideas to
Bruce Lansky´s “I can´t write a poem“ poem grid (in italics).
Here´s my
poem:
I can´t
write a poem.
Forget it.
You must be kidding.
I´m so busy
You must be kidding.
I´m so busy
I have to
prepare my Glossa classes every night
I have to
do the dishes and the vacuuming and exercise at least twice
I am so
tired of writing on the board in my class
I want to
read books and watch blockbusters on the telly
I simply
work too hard
I am not paid enough to be creative
My back
hurts all night
Time’s up?
Uh oh!
All I have is this dumb list of excuses.
You like it? Really? No kidding.
Thanks a lot.
I might give it a try J
All I have is this dumb list of excuses.
You like it? Really? No kidding.
Thanks a lot.
I might give it a try J
For me, creative
writing is a synonym for unlocking imagination. Imagination is a
synonym for playing with the language in an interesting unusual
unique original way. Playing with the language is about becoming more fluent
and flexible using the target language. To become a more advanced user of a
language you have to develop self-confidence and positive motivation.
To feel more motivated we like to collaborate with other people and
share with them.
Encourage your own creativity first
A teacher plays the key role. If you do not believe
creative writing is important, you can´t make a successful use of it in the
classroom. If you never write creatively, your students can never succeed.
Do not believe you can teach creativity
Do not teach them to write creatively, try to unlock
creative thinking instead. Look up interesting topics, surprise students, vary
tasks, discuss and debate things, let them observe each other, provide creative
food for thought, prompt them, make them brainstorm, let them ask. And never
give up!
Stretch creative writing muscles regularly!
Add creative writing tasks regularly. Proceed from
simple tasks to more complicated ones.
I often write poems and stories with students. Not all
poems have to rhyme and yet your students can become poets! Not all stories
have to contain 500 words for students to become creative writers!
Here are my personal poem tips
Functional poem
I like to ask my students to use some phrases (e.g.
for giving your opinion) from the list in coursebook and prepare a poem (e.g.
on the topic of studying English, see NEF Advanced, 1C). Then we collaborate on
the final version of the poem.
In my view studying English is
interesting for you
In my opinion you should know how
to spell garlic and onion
If you ask me I´m good at looking
things up in a dictionary
Personally speaking you ought to study
hard to become a language king
I feel that studying languages
is better than to be a stupid spoilt brat
Which other areas of language could you use this type
of a poem for?
Actually, the type mentioned above is an example of internal
rhyme. To practise more, ask students to complete lines of verse about a
specific topic, e.g. food.
Lollipops
are better than old socks
Christmas
mincepies are a treat for your eyes
Red apples give you healthy lips
Topic poem
Choose a topic (abstract nouns, emotions, activities).
Students work individually then in groups trying to finish the sentence (X is
…) in as many different ways as possible on separate slips of paper. Then they
reorder the slips of paper making a poem out of it.
Loneliness is a telephone that never rings
Loneliness is spending every weekend alone
Loneliness is setting a place at the table for one
Loneliness is nobody remembering your birthday.
Would you like to compose your “creative writing”
topic poem? Creative writing is ….
Variation: Write ten lines, beginning with “I believe
…” or “I think …” is a good way to generate ideas on a given topic.
Group Poem
Give your students four words that
fit a rhyming scheme (or brainstorm the words from students), e.g. ABAB =
writing, story, exciting, glory. The idea is to compose a poem using these
words as the last words in each line of a four line poem.
Can you
think of a group poem task which would fit your coursebook topic?
Variation:
Give them a rhyming structure of about eight to ten lines. They write a list of
words that follow the structure. Then they write a poem.
Many ideas
come from Wordgames: Activities for Creative Thinking and Writing, Dianne Bates.
Diamond poem
Students create a poem following the
structure below.
______
(one noun, subject 1 of the poem)
______ ______ (two adjectives decribing
the noun)
_____
_________ ________ (three gerunds related to the noun)
_________
________ _________ ________ (four nouns, two connected to subejct and two nouns
connected to subject 2)
_____
_________ ________ (three gerunds related to the noun 2)
______ ______ (two adjectives decribing
the noun 2)
______
(one noun, subject 2 of the poem)
Would you like to write a poem on
students and teachers, or men and women?
Here are my tips on writing SMS, minisagas, collaborative stories, fairy tales …
Prompting
“Scaffold” the process of writing. It is useful to provide
students with various and varied (!) types of writing prompts.
Not surprisingly, I use picture prompts a lot. Pictures from course
books, Czech magazines, fotosearch clipart pictures, cartoons with Čtyřlístek,
crazy Internet pictures, Rory´s story cubes or Flickr five card stories help me
spark my students´ imagination.
What about “sound“ prompts instead of pictures? Download some sound
files/sound effects from the Internet and play them to your students who write
a story based on them. E.g. dog barking, opening beer, giggling, a photograph
taken, tornado…
Tick the
prompts you would like to use in the next week of teaching:
- List of random words
- Picture prompts
- Dialogue prompts
- First lines from a novel
- Last lines from a novel
- Sounds
- Song/music
- A caption from a newspaper
- A real object
- A compelling first line
- A compelling plot
- A character profile
- A youtube clip
Imagining
I think
students are more willing to write creatively if the topic mixes familiar and
surprising features.
- Write Cinderella from the point of view of one of the ungly sisters (rather than create a brand new fairy tale)
- Explain what Christmas is to a young pine tree is (rather than write a maturita essay on how you celebrate Christmas in the Czech Republic).
Collaborating
You provide
a first part of the sentence. Display it in the class. Then students are asked
to add one another part at a time (a sentence, a couple of sentences, a
paragraph, a dialogue…) to the story e.g. before the course starts or when they
finish a task early.
Variation:
Prepare a padlet wall with the beginning of a neverending story. Students keep
adding ideas on it.
Enjoy
your two weeks with creative writing. Unlock your imagination, come up with
interesting topics and prompts, collaborate and share!
Masterpiece meoP
OdpovědětVymazatI can´t write a poem.
Forget it.
You must be kidding.
I am as creative as a class full of standard students. (means -5 degrees under a flat stone´s creativity)
I have no pen.
I broke both arms.
I hate poems.
I don't want to borrow a pen.
I want to drink beer in peace and quiet.
I could also become famous and future generations would have to read the rubbish!
Time’s up? Uh oh!
All I have is this dumb list of excuses.
You like it? Really? No kidding.
Thanks a lot.
I might give it a try.
Just a tip for owners of smartphones with Android system: there are some applications with various sounds you can use to prompt students as Katka suggest above.
OdpovědětVymazatKamil, is there any you can recommend to us?
VymazatHere is a page with free sound effects so you can create your own "sound story". http://www.audiomicro.com/free-sound-effects/free-voice-prompts-and-spoken-phrases
Here is another poem written by my students. The task is to describe a certain thing using verbs of senses (sound, look, smell, feel, taske + adj/like + noun/as if/of...). We created odes on English :) English looks yellow and sounds merry. English also sounds romantic. English tastes sweet and as if You have your mouth full of pudding. English feels as if we touch a distance.
OdpovědětVymazatOf course, you can choose other topics such as Christmas, or abstract nouns (see NEF Advanced :)
Here is another "English" poem written by Jitka:
VymazatEnglish tastes like fish´n ´chips
when you have it on your lips
English smells like salted pop corn.
Everyone likes it - except newborn.
English looks like old Big Ben
likes it every Englishman.
English sounds like Beatles ´s song
I can listen to it very long
English feels like gentle touch,
for your attention thank you very much.
Here´s one more example from my class /English by Michael/:
VymazatEnglish looks like Mr.Bean
English smells like tea with biscuits
English tastes like Fish & Chips
English feels like a rainy day
English sounds like Queen Elisabeth singing „It´s a long way to Tipperary“
Here is my favourite "poem". Write this poem on the board:
OdpovědětVymazatKadut
Kadut ja kukat
Kadut ja naiset
Kadut
Kadut ja kukat ja naiset
Ja lapset
Explain to students that it is a poem written in Finnish or any unknown language. They choose the topic of their poem (a noun). Then tell them that ja means "and" in English. Finally, they complete the grid substituting the unknown words with nouns.
Variation: Tell them to choose a noun (kadut). Tell them "ja" means is. Then they complete the poem. Enjoy it!
Not quite a poem, but one creative writing exercise i sometimes use is what i call the Writing Game. Basically, each student has a sheet of paper.
OdpovědětVymazatFirst, they write 3-5 sentences to begin the story. Then they fold the paper so you can only see the last sentence or line. Pass the paper to the student to the right.
Second, they write the "body" of the story, 3-5 sentences, and repeat the process.
Third student writes the end of the story, folds it, and passes it.
Fourth student gets to add a title. Pass one more time and then share (read aloud) the story to the class / group.
(it is better to do this is groups of 4-5 in larger classes)
That is the basic idea of the game, and to add structure here are some things I do:
- Set the type of writing (letter, ghost story, etc). For some classes, it can be good to have the beginning sentence and ending sentence on the board.
- To practice vocabulary, enforce them to use words from the vocab list in class (or from a previous lesson) in the story. For example, if we are working on a food topic and we have new vocab from types of foods and phrases/things in a restaurant, we can say each part of the story needs 2 food items, and 2 things/phrases from a restaurant.
- For grammar and tenses, we do similar. Say that each part of the story needs to use the past perfect or past continuous. (specifying tenses that are commonly used such as the past simple is not necessary, since students generally default to this anyway)
- To enforce the story is on a specific topic, prepare papers with the title already on it. Make sure the title is on the bottom, so that each student can see what the story is about on each part. For example, going with the food and restaurant unit, titles could be "A meal that changed my life" or "The Disaster at the Restaurant"
Grammar and vocabulary use can be enforced through close monitoring, and/or you can have the students correct each other after they read the story.
Sometimes I use a less restrictive version if I use it as an end of the class game, since it is quite fun at the end, and more structured when it is a main part of the lesson.
For some students this is very creative, since they are often tempted to push the rules you set forth. It is quite important to use this activity towards the end of a lesson or unit, so the students have plenty to draw from.
Great collaborative story procedure, Peterz. I tend to use these stories a lot in bigger groups. I really appreciate the extra "rules" you give to your students, such as recycling vocabulary, producing certain structures, practising specific genres of writing.
VymazatYou can use the same procedure to develop characters for stories, students answer your questions and pass the paper to their neighbour after each answer, e.g. Is it he or she? How old is he/she? What does he/she look like? WHat does he/she like doing? WHat is his/her job? etc. When I work with higher levels, I like to recycle prepositional phrases, such as What is he good at? What is she keen on? WHat is he proud of ? What is she happy about? WHat is she weak in? What does he/she speak about all the time? etc. Then they combine two characters and write a story based on the characters.
Anička Hermanová writes on poems: Off-putting, a must, a nightmare - my students usually get scared to death when I utter the word “creative” and if I dare to add “writing” that’s just too much to cope with. It’s hard work to get them writing so thanks for the "I can’t write a poem" poem, I’m sure it will work as a good icebreaker. I like the Diamond poem as well as I do something similar with my students to teach them to write. I provide them with nouns, adjectives, verbs and adverbs and ask them to write a short story. Alternatively, you can give them just nouns and verbs and they can add adjectives, adverbs and linkers later.
OdpovědětVymazatAs for a functional poem, I think you can use anything, e.g.:
NEF Advanced, Unit 3B, inversion:
Not only do I hate writing poems, but I am also too shy.
In no way will I ever become creative.
Neither do I thing it’s silly.
Under no circumstances will I open my heart and tell you that not until you write your first poem will you start trusting your own abilities.
Rarely have I met more creative students than you.
Thanks Anička for nice tips and examples. It is so hard to be creative on Inversion so I really appreciate your combining the functional poem with this rather off-putting grammar structure :)
I used the group poem as a starter this past week and it was fun. Our topic has been clothes, so we came up with A: clothes B: smart A: the most B: heart. Unfortunately, I didn´t take pictures of the actual poems but they were very good.
OdpovědětVymazatA creative writing activity that has always worked well for me is “Band Profiles”. I google images of weird music bands (heavy metal, country etc.) and distribute them among pairs of students. I first ask them to think of a name for the band. Then they pass the sheet to the pair sitting next to them. Then they come up with the style the band plays – pass – coutry of origin – pass – name of their latest album – pass – name of the latest hit – pass – chorus of the hit. You can add or leave things out.
It is nice you managed to combine the group poem with a course book topic. What a pity we can´t enjoy the poems :) I like your "Band Profiles" idea a lot, especially the chorus part, of course. I think you could combine it with the group poem idea, too. I do a similar thing but we set up a story character this way, e.g. They write a name, age, nationality, likes, hates, personality traits, last thing they said, etc. Then they write a story with the character (I usually assign a genre, e.g. a horror story, a fairy tale....) Or, they take on the identity then and answer some coursebook "personal questions from questionnaires and so on.
OdpovědětVymazatHere is my last poem idea. I distribute the nursery rhyme Hickory Dickory Dock to students. Their task is to remember it in one minute, put the sheet aside and then say the nursery rhyme to their partner. Here´s the nursery rhyme:
OdpovědětVymazatHickory, dickory, dock,
The mouse ran up the clock.
The clock struck one,
The mouse ran down,
Hickory, dickory, dock.
Then I distribute the following grid:
Hickory dickory dock
the mouse ran up the clock
the clock struck _________
the mouse said: _________
hickory dickory dock.
THen I distribute numbers 1-12 to students. They have to use their number in the poem and complete the missing line, which must rhyme with the number. E.g. THe clock struck ELEVEN, the mouse said: AM I IN THE HEAVEN? or The clock struck
TEN, the mouse said: OH NO, WHERE IS MY BRAND NEW PEN?
We always have a great fun.
I love poetry and I would love to use poems in my lessons. I had been trying to find some way how to do it BUT: I think I can’t write a poem… with my students.
OdpovědětVymazatI teach Czech for foreigners, mostly A1 levels, 121 (or 122) courses, usually only 90 mins per week (and duration of some of them is limited to 40 TU). To be honest I can’t really imagine asking my students to write a poem. Their aim is mostly to feel less lost here in the Czech Republic. They don’t want to learn Czech perfectly – anyway, they think it is not possible. Then, the most creative task I give to them is usually something like “imagine yourself going to potraviny shop and buying something very typical for you, something you would really buy there and write a dialogue with a shopkeeper” or “remember about your last visit at the doctor, please write your dialogue”.
I remember I used to teach a small group of students at B1-2 level. We did some creative writing, though it was not really a poem. We made comics, we had to finish a story or a fairy tale they listened to / they watched (I used e.g. Jak pejsek a kočička dělali dort – this is very useful for practising genitive) and so on.
I am so jealous now to you, English teachers, who have students at higher levels and bigger groups. But I am curious what do you think is it possible to use creative writing also for lower levels? And for 121 once a week courses (usually not doing their homework)?
Marcela
Hello Marcela, thanks a lot for your comment and the interesting questions you asked. My answers to both/all questions are "Yes" "Yes", of course :) I have used creative writing both in elementary courses and in 1-2-1 courses; we do all the creative writing in the classroom (never for homework unless the students do it voluntarily). Here are my tips: Show your learners from the very beginning that to write a poem you do not have to use rhymes! Actually, rhymes are banned J "Scaffold" them; using some grids/starters/outlines always helps - that is why I have included all the examples such as diamond poem or hickory dickory dock. In group classes, let them collaborate and share ideas. Motivate them – display the poem somewhere, make them share it with someone, make them type it, use wordle … My final tip – take part in the writing process. Show them your own poem attempts or write the first poem together with them J
VymazatHere is a sample grid adapted from old English File book (elementary leve). I am sure you can easily adapt it to practise accusative and why not to link it to potraviny store or films they like watching or things to do in Prague …
I like _________
I like _________
I like _________
But there is one thing I don´t like: ______________
Sample poem:
I like reading books
I like watching films
I like playing scrabble
But there is one thing I don´t like: arguing
As a follow up, two or more students can then compare their poems and rewrite it as a collaborative poem:
We like ________________
We like ________________
We like ________________
But there is one thing we don´t like: __________________
I think it is really challenging for students to write their own poem in L2 at the beginning of the course J At any level, being creative in the target language provides strong motivation and stimulus.
Katka, thank you very much for encouraging me. I have decided to try some poem activity with my students this week.
VymazatAnd by the way, Katka, I really liked poems from your students, mostly Jitkas. It just perfect.
OdpovědětVymazatThanks for the top tip for making poems fun. It went down pretty well with most of the classes I tried it in.
OdpovědětVymazatOne group loved it, so I followed it up the next week with some reading of Dr.Suess poems (just for fun). These poems are meant for children, and have a lot of nonsense words in them, but they are great fun to read out loud.
Thanks a lot Simon for reminding us of Dr. Suess poems. I like them, too. Here is one I used with my AG8 students when we discussed age and ageing :) http://www.woodriverfire.com/drseuss.htm
VymazatOr watch the stories online, e.g. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5GedjRxj9EA on yawning.
I can also recommend Roald Dahl´s Revolting Rhymes. My students really love the Little Red Riding Hood and did a really good job coming up with the rhymes ! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y3uVQIhSYfY